Who dies on a Friday night?
Years ago now
The silly question lingers
A mantra
Not looking for an answer
Who dies on a Friday night?
A mantra
To scare away sadder thoughts
And complicated feelings and
Unfinished sentences
Who dies on a Friday night?
You did
The repetition is a clever and effective reinforcing point to the theme of the poem. Quite simple and direct with the hammer blow in two words. Good stuff.
Ray
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Jeannot
Sun 26th Apr 2020 13:16
Ray,
Thank you for the comments, very helpful to me.
Jeannot