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Overnight Stay

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Overnight Stay

 

“Time for bed” they said,

In a front room warmed by coal fire licks

Where the red and orange and white flames

Danced patterns on the walls of falling dusk

They push, cajole, entice you to the stairs

And do not notice terror tears welling in your eyes

 

Fourteen steps up the narrow stairwell

Tracing fingers on a pale wallpaper wall

Festooned with ornate pastel roses

To the landing at the top to pause

And pluck up courage to move on

Down the dimly lit corridor to the left

 

A bedroom door is open on the right

A bed stripped of its bedclothes

Lying naked in the weak moonlight

That limps in through the curtained window

Boxes piled around it in chaotic lines

That indicate the sparseness of a spare room

 

A grandfather clocks chats ominously in the dark

Of my grandparent’s room

Halfway down the terror tunnel

That leads to where the demons plan their strategies

For unwary children come to stay

And tarry in the white witch’s lair

 

The door croaks, not creaks, a welcome

To the midnight room cloaked in heavy curtains

Bejewelled in dark brown ancient furniture

The bed a giant trap of eiderdown and flannelette

That will grip you in its unforgiving grasp

As soon as your eyes shut, and they will

 

You lie there, little boy,

Counting the tick and the tock

And far away a heavy chime

Rattles out a warning

That the night has just begun

And will last forever

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Ian Whiteley

Fri 3rd Apr 2020 14:51

Thanks for the kind comments - glad you liked it. I think it does tap into a lot of peoples childhood experiences of staying with relatives MC - I never felt threatened in any way - just that creeping unease of unfamiliar surroundings and strange sounds and furniture. Then in the morning the feeling that you had somehow escaped - and soon forgotten ?
Thanks again

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 2nd Apr 2020 18:32

I've lived in places like this as a sprog back in 1950s rural Wiltshire.
One bedroom was on the ground floor beyond what was called the
scullery in those days, with the rear door to the property - an old
cottage on the edge of a large isolated country estate - a few feet away down the passage. My parents slept on the upper floor which
required navigation through the scullery, kitchen, hall, (past the living
room) and up a long flight of stairs, Another bedroom was on the
upper floor of another old cottage: the first of three connected rooms
(access via stairs at either end) with my parents occupying the most
distant room from my own.. Creaky stairs and bumps in the night?
Tell me about it!!

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