Overnight Stay
Overnight Stay
“Time for bed” they said,
In a front room warmed by coal fire licks
Where the red and orange and white flames
Danced patterns on the walls of falling dusk
They push, cajole, entice you to the stairs
And do not notice terror tears welling in your eyes
Fourteen steps up the narrow stairwell
Tracing fingers on a pale wallpaper wall
Festooned with ornate pastel roses
To the landing at the top to pause
And pluck up courage to move on
Down the dimly lit corridor to the left
A bedroom door is open on the right
A bed stripped of its bedclothes
Lying naked in the weak moonlight
That limps in through the curtained window
Boxes piled around it in chaotic lines
That indicate the sparseness of a spare room
A grandfather clocks chats ominously in the dark
Of my grandparent’s room
Halfway down the terror tunnel
That leads to where the demons plan their strategies
For unwary children come to stay
And tarry in the white witch’s lair
The door croaks, not creaks, a welcome
To the midnight room cloaked in heavy curtains
Bejewelled in dark brown ancient furniture
The bed a giant trap of eiderdown and flannelette
That will grip you in its unforgiving grasp
As soon as your eyes shut, and they will
You lie there, little boy,
Counting the tick and the tock
And far away a heavy chime
Rattles out a warning
That the night has just begun
And will last forever
Ian Whiteley
Fri 3rd Apr 2020 14:51
Thanks for the kind comments - glad you liked it. I think it does tap into a lot of peoples childhood experiences of staying with relatives MC - I never felt threatened in any way - just that creeping unease of unfamiliar surroundings and strange sounds and furniture. Then in the morning the feeling that you had somehow escaped - and soon forgotten ?
Thanks again