Picture of hope and dream
I beseech thee
Do not cruelly ask me
To compare the young man
Frozen in a fleeting moment
In that potrait
And the image reflected
In the mirror
That you hold in your hand
His is the ebonied face
In the potrait
Crowned with long flowing
Black hair
His eyes sparkle
With a thousand glints
Of HOPE
Has a beaming smile
That would melt
The coldest heart
Mine is the time chiseled
Scared face
Reflected in the mirror
Scalp brushed with spikey
Strands of white hair
I've dull sunken eyes
Guarding a thousand
Lifes experiences
And wear an
Uncompromising wry smile
His are the tales of all my
Tomorrows HOPES
Mine are the songs of
The fulfilment of all his
Yesterdays DREAMS
Abdul Ahmad
Sun 5th Apr 2020 12:12
Jennifer
Thank you for your positive feedback. Poetry is observation of life unfolding. Twists and turns in ones own life experiences result in different endings to the same themes. Some look back with joy others with regret and both are real emotions.
Enjoyed reading your 2019 work "Regrets"
Same theme different experiences