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Nothing but rainbows

The lights are still on

But there is no one there to see them

The traffic lights wink at each other

In perfect sequence

Saying its your turn now

But not a single word is spoken

Because there is no one to speak them

And no one to answer back

No jugglers

No singers

No speakers of the words

No hawkers

Crocodiles of children or foreign tourists

Just the stand still silence

And the flapping of a flag

 

No heaving mass or phalanx

Of shouting, laughing

Or the overriding buzz and hum

Of collective conversations

Through the ringing tones

Of international mobile connections

No armoured columns

Of case and bags

 

Just the buses

Taking no one

To there and back

In half the time

 

In Harrods window

No mannequins

Or promotion of the new season

Nothing but rainbows

That say all we cannot

And frankly is never enough

Thank you N.H.S.

 

Based on a recent BBC presenters words and pictures of London

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Martin Elder

Mon 11th May 2020 08:48

I know what you mean John. The silence is very appealing. So many people have mentioned the fact that it is possible to hear the sound of the birds in built up areas.
I love the analogy of gangs of goats in Oxford street. I have visions of adolescent goats in leather jackets hanging around on street corners.

Thanks John

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John Marks

Sun 10th May 2020 18:57

For me your portrait of silence is so appealing. Gangs of goats down Oxford Street next? We can only hope so. John

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Martin Elder

Sat 9th May 2020 18:52

Thanks for reading and commenting Hannah . It is quire strange that nowadays in almost any town or city the rush hour can be just half a dozen vehicles at the traffic lights.

Thanks again

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Fri 8th May 2020 18:45

Amazing imagery of a city in Locldown.
You can feel the sadness, the desertion.


Hannah

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Martin Elder

Thu 30th Apr 2020 10:12

Thanks Jeff. Yes we do live in strange times at the moment when if you see a dozen cars at the traffic lights you might think that's busy!
Thankfully I am finding plenty to keep me occupied. Hope you are O.K.

Cheers Jeff
hope we catch up sometime in the future

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Jeff Dawson

Wed 29th Apr 2020 21:18

Hi Martin

Very poignant mate, quite eerie as well - very well written - I've just posted a tribute to NHS and key workers if you want to read that.

I'm just catching up as you can tell! As it's over a month since I wrote Under Attack and you commented (thanks), things haven't changed much, in that it all seems a bit bizarre although shopping is okay now! Who knows where the end is though, folk getting restless but the death toll rocketing, so sad ? Hope you're okay cheers Jeff

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Martin Elder

Sun 26th Apr 2020 12:11

Thanks Jon. It is really strange to think of London being so empty like so many places

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Jon

Fri 24th Apr 2020 15:26

Hi Martin

A fantastic Poem that expresses perfectly the state of our ghostlike towns and cities at this point in history.

An eerily effective ending also with the Harrods window displaying gratitude for our amazing NHS rather than the latest commercial trend.
Jon

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