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I LOVE YOU TODAY - an old love song revised/reprised

Lucky it's me

So glad it's you

Enchantment in all

Of the things that we do

My feelings are many

My words but a few

Remember - I love you today

 

Maybe we could

Maybe we would

Always be tender

It's good that we should

When love comes so rarely

It's misunderstood

Remember - I love you today

 

The smile that I know

The way you say hello

The thrill that I get

When we kiss

The ache in my heart

That begins when we part

All the things about you that I miss

 

Sometimes it's joy

Sometimes it's pain

Always the sun

Shining after the rain

And always I'll tell you

Again and again

Remember - I love you today

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🌷(5)

◄ JUDGEMENT DAY

DANCE ON ►

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 28th Apr 2020 14:29

Thanks for your comment, Hannah. Love, in all its variety, can only
help to make us feel better about ourselves. At least, I like to think so
in my old-fashioned way.

<Deleted User> (18118)

Tue 28th Apr 2020 14:21

Love like this is a gift.
Beautiful poem.

Hannah

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 27th Apr 2020 13:10

It seemed appropriate to upload something positive at this time.
Thanks Nia and JC for the comments - and more thanks to those who "liked" this blog..

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John Coopey

Sun 26th Apr 2020 18:24

Nice work again, MC. I don't remember this first time round.

Nia Davies

Sun 26th Apr 2020 17:14

Lovely poem ?

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