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wind

Fall in here
into this room
into this life
into this home
like a golden leaf
floating through the window
on a warm summer breeze

A gentle push
that changes your way
and brings you
to me

I´m waiting for you

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sat 16th May 2020 04:01

Nice. ?

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Michael Triandam

Thu 30th Apr 2020 20:51

I like this poem...immediately it reminded me of Rumi and his relationship with his teacher, Shams. It also reminded me of a carefree way of living where you move with the breeze.

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