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SUN(Yellow)

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Unique in every way

Intriguing at sight

But Cute as a button

Straight shooter like a sniper

Elegance is her nature

First sight of her took me to paradise

Her energy is like a rocket

Dancing is her vibe like Hendrix on the electric G

Boss lady In need of no Guidance

Is what I love about her

Every conversation with her is like a river Because we flow

No pen no paper but she draw my full attention

everything about her is flawless ,even her imperfection

She’s the sun with a lot of cheerfulness

4 steps,i hear my heart skip a beat thinking of her

Walking besides still waters ...smooth sails there I found her,my peace ☮️

I found mon tresor ?

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passionate

◄ RED

MANIA I ►

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Shalom Jordans

Tue 30th Jun 2020 13:45

thank you so much for your comments it means alot to me that you understand and love the words i have laid down

<Deleted User> (24283)

Mon 29th Jun 2020 13:56

This is beautifully painted in words.

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