Unclean
Unclean
So only the dirty, the unclean, ungodly
Will be refused favour come judgement day
They will sit in their hovels of dust a distress
And live out their lives in their dishevelled way
They will scrape in the filth for a reason to live
They will hurt, they will need, they will cry, they will pay
For their corrupt and defiled code of getting on by
Where they sin and can’t even be bothered to pray
You are left on your own to continue the fight
The guardian angel refuses to stay
The gold gates of heaven are barred to you now
And the gatekeeper tells you to “just go away,”
“We have counted your sad misdemeanours on earth
And cannot allow you admittance” he’ll say.
So you carry your sins in a carrier bag
And return to the living in damned disarray
Your soul is tainted by each daily toil
The soap and the water won’t keep demons at bay
You are tired and lonely and unloved by God
And you never realised how much your own sins would weigh
You’re the grubby and festering soil of mankind
The ugly and misshapen statue of clay
That hardens and crumbles when all’s said and done
You’re the promise of love that Judas will betray
Ian Whiteley
Thu 14th May 2020 14:18
Thanks for the kind comments mate - I'm glad it struck a chord with you.
I'm a fan of Leonard Cohen - so maybe that influence was there - although it wasn't deliberate.
I think this poem works on a couple of levels - it's basic thrust is the hypocrisy of religious teaching - that makes something that is less than perfect feel 'unclean' when it is those imperfections that make us human.
I wrote it quickly - but I like the rhythm of it and I will probably work on it at some point in the future to produce a song from it.
I really appreciate you taking the time to comment
Ian