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Rain turned into wine

the naked earth

by April's

ceaseless heat baked

now bathes

in June's

dancing tears

 

savouring the pirouetting tears

now fermented into

vintage wine

makes plants blush

in myriad shiny colours

and much greener glow

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◄ A true Leprechauns tale?

Tempting smile ►

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Abdul Ahmad

Sun 7th Jun 2020 21:11

Emeka

I appreciate your comments regarding the relationship between the sky and the earth and the notion of birth and rebirth.

Thank you for hitting the like button

Abdul

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Emeka Collins

Sun 7th Jun 2020 20:35

This pictures the relationship between the sky and the Earth, between birth and rebirth.
Well done

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Abdul Ahmad

Sun 7th Jun 2020 17:33

Moon.girl, Po and Mortimer

I raise my tankard and toast you three for your generous comments!

Thank you for the like, too.

Abdul

MortimerBlooming

Sun 7th Jun 2020 15:33

I will drink that wine any day Abdul.

Mortimer

<Deleted User> (24283)

Sun 7th Jun 2020 10:44

Dancing tears of joy and happiness I hope,
Vintage wine, the tears are more richly defined.
Creative!! Beautifully pictured.

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