Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

Solitude

 

In its gentle and peaceful flight

To the rhythm of the sound in romance,

Love got me drunk in the morning.

At the morning sound of the rooster

My soul barely touched the ground,

I was drunk on you oh Love!

You barely passed, I passed away

But when evening came!

The freshness of silence knocked on my door

The sweetness of regret sifted my memories

Like the morning rooster, I cry out

My cry of distress disappears in the waves

The raging and contrary waves

In the evenings, my ship capsizes

It loses it captain, his crew

Shipwrecked, by the river I sleep

Oh ! Loneliness, see, I submit to you

Alone, without strength, she shackles me

Loneliness, sweet and revealing

I submit freely

Loneliness, hard and clever

I surrender without embarrassment

Every sad evening, I wait for dawn

I wait for the sun to rise again

I wait for the rooster to sing again

To still pick the fruits of my passion

Passion that revolves around itself.

🌷(2)

◄ This is the day

Comments

Profile image

Joseph Matondo

Sun 21st Jun 2020 20:55

thank you so much Abdul and Rosemary

Profile image

Abdul Ahmad

Sat 13th Jun 2020 12:36

You've crafted some beautiful lines in this poem. I particularly like

"But when evening came!"

and

"The freshnesss of silence knocked on my door"

Very evocative.

RoseMary

Thu 11th Jun 2020 15:09

Beautifully expressed write. Sounds and feels amazing.

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message