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Another.

Another

In a series

Look into the eyes

Make the heart float

Make the heart sink.

 

Another

In a series

Of reasons

Make the heart open

Make the heart close.

 

Another

One of those blinding visions

Make the heart beat

Make the heart ache.

 

He was another

And another is what they all were.

◄ So Lay Me Down.

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<Deleted User> (7904)

Wed 12th May 2010 20:06

This is nice - really tight, spare, and controlled. There isn't an extraneous word.

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Andy N

Mon 10th May 2010 08:16

makes me think off hugo williams's stuff a bit here, georgina - i really enjoyed this.. the last stanza is a nice change in pace totally x

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