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Please help me to glorify war


(it’s the only way I can justify it)

I’m short of some rock music
To overlay on my Vietnam video
have you any to trade?
I'm thinking thrash metal
if that's ok.....I think it will work
I wish to depict
Burning kids
and tin lids exploding
My father fought in wars
you see
And I play computer games
-Make Microsoft movies
I honour him
I wish to depict
the star studded glory
of a mini gun,
Its muzzle blazes,
Frozen in 35mm slide, the war photographer,
He asked my dad,
not to look directly at the camera,
but continue as though he were fighting.

Hard to tell what’s really real
Even in war.
Electronic alienation these days
I read of bayonets once.

And you think it would be serious

I get a detention if I'm caught lying
dont know what school adults are from.

-I am a boy
And I look at your pictures.

What else am I supposed to do.

◄ a broken law of friendship

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Comments

Pete Crompton

Sun 23rd Mar 2008 01:09

really good point Clarissa! it makes sense in a crazy way, too put that mad music over all the killing. the killing was stupid in the first place. to underline it with this just extends the lunacy. it is all part of the same self re inforcing club. like jinkies hangin out only with junkies. it all seems fine if you share the same delusion.

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clarissa mckone

Mon 3rd Mar 2008 04:44

Hi Peter, I asked Matthew why they put Rob Zombie music with his games and with war shows, He said its to make it more intense. I said why make such an intense situation more intense? He answerd me with a question, why have soft music in a love story? He said it expresses feelings, the hard music expresses to him that its hard times in war, that those men are forced, wether they joind up in peace time or were drafted, they are forced to buck up and bite lips and move forward as commanded. I think he may have a point, but I think all so that the military has used this form of music to get young men to join up, to seem cool, to seem more man like. But of corse I know a man can be soft and loving and still be a man and a man can clean house and cook and hes still a man to me. They dont have to go to war to prove it.But if Im in a situation and those are rare, I expect to be protected, If Im the one brandeshing a bat while being attacked and hes in the closet, I may lose some respect. Ok now Im off the subject. LOL take care

Pete Crompton

Mon 3rd Mar 2008 02:02

Hi Clarissa
its crazy they put all that zombie music over the kiling

nutz

but it seems more so in USA? or is that just becuase the technology starts there, then spreads? prob

nothing new under the sun

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clarissa mckone

Sun 2nd Mar 2008 04:45

Cool. Well, I really did not think you were looking for a song, esp that type of song. I dont really like that stuff either, but when I was having ex husband problems, I did listen to them at times, I guess, though Im small, the music made me feel bad and bigger, altho I am a non combative type, Ill yell and run away. LOL what a chicken, I am. Seems many poems have nothing to do with you, or are old feelings, or something you relate to. I agree most is tripe, I will give Rob Zombie an actors award, as hes not his music. I remember the Guns and roses convo, but it could be that he is his music.Vietnam what a mess that was, and inocents were on both sides, as the military was lied to, by CIA operatives, but of corse that does not make it less painful for those that lost loved ones there, or got their legs blown off. Yeah I have seen it on You tube, cant say that I like it, but to each their own. The killer I knew and told you about was my grandfather who was in WW2 fighter pilot, he acted as if killing was fun. I never did understand him. Remeber I told you about him, hes the bad one. You welcome, gee more then 2 words. im amazed.

Pete Crompton

Sun 2nd Mar 2008 02:33

Hi Clarissa
Thanks for your encoragement!
I dont want to be mis-understood, many of my poems have nothing to do with me, I'm not looking for a song, but I think i can imagine those ones you mentioned, thrashmetal crazy stuff!

I would never even go there
not even listen to a second of the tripe
i loathe it
its not music to me.

I would never look for any music, nor dare put it over the poor innocents of vietnam villages

but

they do it on you tube regular

thats what I thought about

the killer instinct you mention, yes I understand about that ........

thanks a lot for comments and positive observation

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clarissa mckone

Sun 2nd Mar 2008 00:30

Hi Peter,
Here are a few songs for you to look up
Rob Zombie- superbeast
Rob Zombie-lords of salem
Metalica-enter sandman
Slayer- not sure what song there
God ... what to say about war.
Video games and war, seems boys love them.
But I dislike them and war.
Good poem I think I can see where your going with this.Seems some that have never seen how vile and graphic and painful war can be, how final, well when they do see it, it seems to not bother them.That is to say the pictures and games/movies.I guess it may become real and thus painful in real life for most, and then it is to late, they have been hurt by visions, and thus live with pain. Then it seems some dont care,I know of one such person, it could be he was crazy and had a killer instinct. Good poem peter.

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