Saltwater
When an ocean cries
For the loss of love,
In grief,
What seeps from its eyes,
The swell of every wave
Beneath?
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I assume you made the alterations then, Banksy, as it's perfect now! :)
<Deleted User> (7212)
Sat 15th May 2010 20:50
BP oil ??
And you too Stefan, thank you
You're quite right, Ann! Thank you
I like it Nash, except the last line. I'd leave that out, but it's your poem ;-)
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sat 15th May 2010 11:20
ah! thats only your opinion-(perhaps-in-and not-for-grief? I humbly ask.
I'm not sure I like this
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Nash
Wed 19th May 2010 11:38
Thanks Chris and to all, very helpful suggestions and I'm actually much happier with it now...good work, people!