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Equilibrium of mind

if my mind should

ever aflame

to a deserted

place in nature

I shall retreat

 

there free

and devoid of attachments

I shall be happy

by my self

 

here cocooned inside

natures comforting womb

the fluid depths

of my futile concerns

will be laid bare to

to see

 

then mother nature

with her hyptonic potions

shall  melt

my anxieties away

 

ultimate truths

happy and wise

beyond desire and passion

will help restore

the equilibrium

of my mind

 

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◄ Rosy future

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Abdul Ahmad

Fri 10th Jul 2020 11:07

Shifa
Thank you for such encouraging remarks.

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Shifa Maqba

Fri 10th Jul 2020 10:58

The verses in your poem flow like a dream. What a treat to read!

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Abdul Ahmad

Thu 9th Jul 2020 14:48

B.g thank you for sharing the sublime music of my favourite sounds:

the waterfall, cascading torrent and the birds.

I shall listen to it again before retiring tonight and many times more.

Apppreciate the like.

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Abdul Ahmad

Thu 9th Jul 2020 14:42

Anmolpreet Kaur nature is indeed a great healer. Thank you for the like, too.

<Deleted User> (24283)

Thu 9th Jul 2020 14:33

Really....my earnest desire. Telepathic write...I'm sure many of us desire this.

Just a little escape....enjoy this music

https://youtu.be/lE6RYpe9IT0

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Thu 9th Jul 2020 14:29

Nature has cure of everything

Ak

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