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GOLDFISH

 

Round and round

the Goldfish swims

trapped in a bowl

he swims up to the glass

to look

to see what else is there

in its small unnatural world

with a tiny ceramic castle

its only distraction

it is a pet under glass

someones desire

once upon a time

now barely looked at

or talked to

flakes in the bowl

once a day

are all the attention it gets

it won't last long

all Goldfish die

a sad and lonely death

to be cupped in a cloth

and buried in the back yard

the last link to childhood

and frivolous days

days which came and went

too quickly

the fish and the child's youth

now part of the past.

 

 

 

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 26th Jul 2020 17:37

Good one. Genuinely moving.

d.knape

Sat 25th Jul 2020 21:43

Fish needs psychological counselor?
where do you find one?

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Sat 25th Jul 2020 13:22

Gold fish needs psychological counsellors help. She will be contacting soon. She has to come out of all her confusions or she may die soon

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 25th Jul 2020 13:09

Aww poor goldfish, good job it's believed to only have a short memory! Very auspicious symbol in Feng Shui though?

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