Rain
Droplets, flicked off the waving trees, Shower me with wet. The abundant trees Full-throated bastions of wet in the nest. The birds are soaked but cheerfully quiet Their breeding has been done, fledglings Scattering raindrops as they show off Their wings. I look on bedraggled, envious. Rain is such a comfort on these crowded Islands. Rarely tempestuous, mostly mild, Like the people. Slow to storm, but persistent. I love to hear the sound of rain on windows Or in puddles, the same as when I was a boy Whispering 'ship ahoy' at the merest mention of Water. Now in these latter days, upon this fractured isle, The rain slides down my window, as red as blood at slaughter.
Shifa Maqba
Tue 28th Jul 2020 03:53
"The rain slides down my window, as red as blood at slaughter", what a rattling twist to the poem! In its optimistic parts, you've done a skillful job painting a such a vibrant picture of nature, the kind of picture I'd love to be trapped in. Great poem!