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The air that kills

Abbeförderung ('dispatching, removal') – euphemism for mass murder.

The air that kills, miasmic fogs
Disperse the pollutions of the past
Into the ever-present

Nothing lasts, they say.
Fasts, self-denying ordnances,
All the ferocities
Of religion, ideology
Do not matter a jot.
Mortality is our lot.

So, listen to the beautiful airs of music,
Be tolerant of unforeseen strictures of fate,
Be one with the forsaken.

Mental illness is a mystery wrapped inside a puzzle,
As holy fools attest.
Those touched by the Holy Spirit,
Especially sisters of the night,
"Hysterical" women*, condemned as witches.
Troubadours sing sad airs of tragic love madness
Under the moon, lunacy challenged reason's sway.

This is the air that kills,
The air of perverted reason,
That air that sent the Shoah
Six million Jews condemned to cruel, cruel death
By doctor, engineer, administrator, teacher, clerk
Family men all, all, deep-dyed psychopaths.

* - The Greek word for womb is "hyster"

 

Members of Neturei Karta Orthodox Jewish group protest against Israel.jpg

By Peter - Orthodox group and poster, CC BY 2.0, https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=3237622

 

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John Marks

Wed 29th Jul 2020 21:14

Politics exists because people disagree. They disagree about how we should live. Who should get what? How should power and other resources be distributed? Should society be based on cooperation or conflict? And so on. So, yes, the poem is political, just as life is political.

"... pic of Jews supporting Germans to show there were no hard feelings." Read it again Brian. Are you serious? Who has the right to forgive the attempted mass murder of a whole people? Not me.

<Deleted User> (18980)

Wed 29th Jul 2020 14:22

John, if you'd shown a pic of Jews supporting Germans to show there were no hard feelings I would have immediately seen the connection to the poem. But highlighting the Palestinian cause, noble as it is, suggests that a political point is being made.

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John Marks

Wed 29th Jul 2020 12:03

Because it illustrates that even after the horrors of the Holocaust some Jews still reject the triumphalism and expansionism of the Zionist establishment and empathise with the sufferings of the Palestinian people.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Tue 28th Jul 2020 20:38

Your poetry is next level John. Always educational to the layman and poet. If you are not a professor of poetry, you should be!

<Deleted User> (18980)

Tue 28th Jul 2020 20:20

John - I am not great at seeing hidden meanings, so I've looked very hard at this piece but still fail to see how the image of pro-Palestine orthodox Jews fits in with it.

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