It was____
I sat under
the Acer
besides the pond
for hours today
watching
fleeting reflections
floating by.
Then I saw
a still reflection
of a face
that I knew
linger in my mind
and a river of tears
cascaded down my cheeks.
It was___
Comments
A mystery yet to solve......i loved it.
Ak
Shaifa thank you for your usual well thought out remarks. Always a pleasure to read your comments.
Paul
If you meant me as yourself it may be true.
It definately wasn't me as myself.
Then it could be anyone.
Thank you my friend for hitting the like.
Some thoughts are best left ambiguous, shrouded in mystery, and your poem does complete justice to that. Contemplative and mystical!
Philipos thank you for your continued support and sending a like.
Emeka thank you for striking the like.
Philipos
Mon 3rd Aug 2020 22:01
Cliff hanger waiting to unfold. P.
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Abdul Ahmad
Sat 8th Aug 2020 16:00
Anmolpreet Kaur I'm confident given time the mystery will be solved. Thank you for striking the like.