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Floral dance

The lupin crowned with pink blossom,

Is peering through the earth.

The early September sun,

showers it with a thousand kisses.

A hundred bees are attracted by

the blushing pink flowers.

And they joyfully do the

floral dance waltzing through

the tall spikes of the pink flowers.

🌷(5)

◄ Escape August's veil

Fall from grace ►

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Abdul Ahmad

Sun 20th Sep 2020 22:38

Anmolpreet Kaur

Thank you for your generous comment and the like.

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Sun 20th Sep 2020 14:46

Abdul your work always succeed to make our minds blossom as well.

Ak

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Abdul Ahmad

Sun 6th Sep 2020 10:20

Keith thank you for your remarks. Your input is always encouraging and appreciated. Ta for the like, too.

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keith jeffries

Sat 5th Sep 2020 23:24

Abdul,

Another poem which takes the reader straight to the flower. A poem which automatically triggers the imagination.

Thank you for this
Keith

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Abdul Ahmad

Sat 5th Sep 2020 20:20

Paul your deep analysis is always appreciated. Thank you for your constant support.

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Abdul Ahmad

Sat 5th Sep 2020 20:08

Stephen thank you for you continuing support. Your encouragement is appreciated.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 5th Sep 2020 16:50

Conjures up a beautiful image, Abdul.

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