The leaves once so pretty
flirted shamelessly with
every gentle breeze
and how gracefully
they danced in the
bright glow of every sunshine.
Now touched by the
cold autumn wind
the leaves break free
from the trees
to hide their wrinkles
and fall from grace
into a roadside ditch.
Kevin T.S. Tan
Mon 21st Sep 2020 12:38
perhaps falling from grace is just as natural as the autumn leaves being shed by the trees. it reminds me of the melancholy of "the sun also rises" by Ernest Hemingway. and that's a compliment!
Anmolpreet Kaur thank you for visiting and leaving constructive comments. The like is appreciated too.
The thin line between the two seasons well described and what a good comparison.
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Dan thank you for your constructive criticism on this work. Every season has a purpose and autumn is when nature begins to slow down before winter locks it down and spring reawakens it.
Appreciate the encouraging like.
I am impressed with the imagery and efficiency of your words, but also somewhat depressed. This season in life does have it's purpose.
Shifa many thanks for your recent visit and the encouraging remarks left. The like is much appreciated.
there's so much beauty in this concise poem. very well written!
Thank you Nicola for your commentary on Fall from Grace. Much appreciated.
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Sat 12th Sep 2020 20:14
Beautiful xx
Stephen I too pray that the predicted heatwave will encourage them to hold on. Thank you for the like.
Lovely rhythm, Abdul. Hopefully the heatwave will keep them in place for a few more days!
Robert Haigh
Sat 12th Sep 2020 17:06
Nicely described in poetic fashion. Perfect title too.
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Abdul Ahmad
Tue 22nd Sep 2020 17:53
Kevin your generosity overwhelms me. Thank you for your comments and the like.