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Just a note

Hindsight follows blind-sight,
dark-light falls to bright white,
now the time's right to make the wrongs right
and for you and me to re-quite
our love.
 

◄ Contrary mary

Look out, there are murderers about. ►

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Andy N

Tue 1st Jun 2010 08:13

for a short piece, kath.. i think this does carry some impact. would like to move wrote like this.. keep em coming! x

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Steven Kenny

Sun 30th May 2010 23:44

Very nice Kath! I love the rhythm through this poem! Great work! :-) x

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