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Our Future

I look to the horizon and watch the dawn break.

Once again, several hours, I have been awake.

Being unable to sleep, I no longer can take.

My interest, my happyness, again I must fake.

We raise the flag to a new day.

We salute, we recite our anthem, our respect we pay.

But what does it mean? did the real point stray?

Our young, the next generation, they want a new way.

They deserve that, and need that, their future is at stake.

About us, our lessons, our teachings, our advice will they take?

But why? What have we taught them? What a mess we did make.

May God bless them, the future is THEIRS.

And for them, my heart does ache.

 

By J.D. Bardo

 

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J.D. Bardo

Tue 27th Oct 2020 19:42

Keith, again so well spoken, I am sure you are a great Philosopher, A touch of remembrance here for servicemen, thank-you

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keith jeffries

Tue 27th Oct 2020 19:32

JD.,

they say that within every poet there beats the heart of a philosopher and this poem is an example of such. As a generation we are already guilty of failing the next generations but is there anything we can do to make amends or is it too late? Perhaps all they can do is to learn from our mistakes.

A good and thoughtful poem
Thank you for this
Keith

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J.D. Bardo

Tue 27th Oct 2020 19:24

thank-you Bon. that poem must move others as it does me. I am reading you as well.

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Bon Darcy

Tue 27th Oct 2020 19:18

Hmm, should they listen to those that flounder, making bad choices, rely on the founders, to show them the way, when we haven't found ours, advice from the heart, but the taste of it sours. I enjoyed your poem and it perfectly captures the current mood for many

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J.D. Bardo

Tue 27th Oct 2020 19:09

thank-you Jordyn, I have been reading.

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J.D. Bardo

Tue 27th Oct 2020 18:57

thanks for all you do Paul. our future here in the states looks bleak.

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