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Thinking

I pick up a handful of soil,

From underneath my feet.

I hold it up to the sun,

That gives us light and heat.

Intensely,

My mind ponders these creations.

I cannot help but wonder,

About our relations.

The soil, and the light,

Renew every day.

So, curiously I think,

What will come my way?

Soon, my bodies life will be done.

It will decay....

Back into the soil.

Under the sun....

My mind, so complex, it is true.

Will not believe that with death,

"It" is through.

Thinking of death,

Has me sometimes feeling blue.

My only comforting thought....

That after death, my life will renew.

 

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J.D. Bardo

Sat 7th Nov 2020 06:53

Thank-you everyone for likes and comments, I am flattered.
I am happy thinking about what you are thinking, about "thinking".

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Fri 6th Nov 2020 19:07

And so it's and so it will be, you'll return to mother earth and father sky. I think of death sometimes in these covid times xx I try to think of life, you'll live a long life I can tell these things, you've a while to go yet......

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keith jeffries

Fri 6th Nov 2020 19:00

Another poem of self exploration well penned and thought provoking.
Thank you for this
Keith

Philipos

Fri 6th Nov 2020 09:01


Morbid thinking, sometimes the essence of a great poem - certainly a pause for thought.

Enjoyed.

P.

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