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Caff On The Corner

She sits in the gloom of the caff on the corner,

Alone at the table since seven o’clock.

The hours that have passed have not muted her anger,

Nor lessened the sorrowful sting of the shock.

 

With eyes that are downcast and seeping with sadness,

The coffee she clutches is tasteless and cold.

Her face lacks expression, so pallid and bloodless,

Her thoughts on the one who will never grow old.

 

Her mind is in turmoil, emotions confusing,

She stares at a cup that she can’t really see.

Oh, how could you leave and consign me to grieving,

And how will I live without you here with me.

 

For you were the light at the end of my tunnel,

The cream in my coffee, the love of my life;

The sound of your silence has signalled a death knell,

A future that’s stillborn, no saving midwife.

 

She sits in the gloom of the caff on the corner,

And nothing has changed since she sat in that chair,

Except that the grip of the grief has grown keener,

Surrounded by shadows of one who’s not there.

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John Coopey

Wed 18th Nov 2020 22:33

Wonderful, Trevor. Anguish and hurt in spades. Brilliantly understated story-telling. It reminded me of Trevor Howard and Celia Johnson and of Betjeman's Pershore Station.
I suppose we all had a different interpretation of what the backstory was, which is a quality in itself, being able to offer different pictures to us all. My own take was a girl thinking of her WW1 soldier who didn't come home.
One of the best things I've ever read on this site.

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Trevor Alexander

Wed 18th Nov 2020 15:32

Thanks all.

Yes, Philipos, although IMHO the caffs these days are not what they were.

And yes Brian, it was intended to about a woman whose partner had died.

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Wed 18th Nov 2020 10:57

One of your best and saddest Trev.

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Rose ?

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Wed 18th Nov 2020 07:33

Like Philipos my first thought centred on the use of words 'stillborn' and 'midwife', but I believe these are used as metaphors and the poem is not about childbirth at all. My feeling is that this is to do with being left by the man she had planned her future with. Only Trevor knows...

Great poem Trev!

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 17th Nov 2020 19:49

Flows with beautiful poetic rhythm. Superb.

Philipos

Tue 17th Nov 2020 19:40


Quite a write Trevor - I was humbled reading this - I especially like the ordered way you set out your work, it's what is merely hinted at that gives it the power.

It is very often these subtleties, which drive the momentum.

Thumbs up on this, big time.

Who hasn't sat in a caff on the corner and watched the momentum of an ever changing world.

I'm guessing it is a lady who didn't go full term with a pregnancy - and i know from a family member how devastating that can be.

Great compassionate piece.

P.

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