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My Other Poem Is Better Than This One

I have another poem
which is better than this one.
It is shiny and goes much faster
It sounds better and means more.
My other poem is kept for special occasions
and protected 

This poem is my run-around poem
Don't judge me on it.
 

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 5th Feb 2021 01:11

Thank you to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Thu 3rd Dec 2020 13:41

Funny, but actually I have many other poems and only one of them is better than this one.. ? The rest of them are swept under the carpet.

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