The story of life
They played cards
and they talked
whilst the little
chess pieces
danced
The eldest lit
a cigarette
whilst the youngest
exhaled
Its smoke
Empty whisky bottles
shuffled nervously
and someone
in the corner
sang a song
about the sea
and a canon ball
A man stared blindly
into the future
droning incessantly
into the
Flea bitten ear
Of a cat
whose miaow
forced
the shadows
to draw
hasty sketches
of tunnels
on the walls
The house
Shivered
Its timbers
As the spider ladies
mumbled the fate
Of folk
from a darkened place
Which once had been
The centre
Of everything
There was no escape
from
the House of Creation
Some thrived and sparked
Whilst others drowned
their sorrows
with the empty promise
of broken
spirits
Together
they painted
the story
Of
Life
Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Wed 16th Dec 2020 23:01
it seems apt (for the story of life) that I can't remember how it started by the time I reach the end of it. I also think I'll have to read it quite a few times to unravel the story but this isn't a criticism of the poem, I just have very poor short term memory. Anyway it feels as if it is being told prettily and wittily and there's some really good moments in it.