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Postcodes

Sitting down to my Christmas card deadline,

I feel that I am writing back in time,

To country cottages in floating clouds

Which languish in a land behind the lines.

A place where lives stand still for one whole year.

Unfair, of course, although the envelopes,

Weightless, still shrug with resignation.

I take a breath. Perhaps it’s no one’s fault.

Unwrapping memories, I concentrate

On the postcodes, which at least have meaning.

🌷(6)

◄ Border Guard

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 29th Dec 2020 15:22

Cheers, Jeff. All the best for the New Year.

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 28th Dec 2020 11:48

Like it Stephen, interesting thoughts. Thanks for your comment on my poem Pastor Mick, inspiring men indeed, cheers Jeff

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 23rd Dec 2020 17:24

Thanks for the kind comment, Greg. Like you, I still get through the list of distant relatives and old friends, even if it does sometimes feel like writing into a void. Having said that, I suppose it is all part of life's fabric, difficult to define but regretted when it is gone.

Thanks to all for the likes.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 22nd Dec 2020 19:18

This has a real Larkin tone to it. We still send them out, although we think we get fewer back each year.

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