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Strange man

 

‘What a strange man,’ she said.

‘I don’t know. We all have strangeness in our heart,’ he replied.

 

One week later, the strange man died.

 

‘I knew I was right,’ she declared.

 

If there is a problem,

It will not be shared.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 29th Dec 2020 16:04

Much appreciated, Michael.

You have got me thinking again.....

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Michael Kwack

Tue 29th Dec 2020 15:54

I like this poem, really I liked.

The real strange thing about a man would be that he dies (one week later, or far later)
whoever.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 24th Dec 2020 15:51

And thanks to Tom and Bramwell for the likes.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 24th Dec 2020 15:50

Thank you Paul and Stephen. Yes, as you suggest, I still struggle with the identity of the strange man. Is he the man in line 2 or a third party? If he is in line 2, there is definitely no one to share problems with. If he's someone else, there is tension in the relationship. Or is there?

As usual, more questions than answers.

I'm signing off for a few days and wish everyone a Merry Christmas.

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 23rd Dec 2020 19:49

A strange tale for strange times

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