the tattered old man on Christmas Eve
the tattered old man on Christmas Eve
snow was falling hard
as the old man struggled
through the deep drifts
on the country road
light shone from a
a farmhouse window
the old man smiled seeing the glow
it was a candle
the widowed mother had placed there
nightly since last Christmas Eve
a year ago
a man was found
frozen along this same road
mother did not want
it to happen again
perhaps a poor soul might
see the candle lit
and ask for help
on Christmas Eve
mother sat by the fireplace
she read Christmas stories
to her two children
as the icicles sparkled on the tree
fire light danced
as snow continued to fall
as she read
the children listened
to the harsh wind blow
around the corner of the house
making a wailing tune
they were warmed by the fire
suddenly there was a pecking
at the front door
mother stopped reading
the children drew close
they waited
again there was a knock…
louder
but gently
mother told the children to
stay by the fire
she went to the door
she opened it cautiously
there stood an old man
tattered clothes
worn out boots
an old hat
but no gloves
he tipped his hat and said
evening ma’am
might an old man
just come in for a few minutes
to warm his hands on this cold night
the children’s eyes grew big
as a mince meat pie
while watching
yes please come in
mother said
sit near the warm fire
I will make you a cup of hot tea
he took off his old coat
and hat
and hung them on a hook by the front door
he settled into the overstuffed chair
near the fire as he
warmed his hands
loaded with questions
the children followed mother
to the kitchen
to fetch the tea
who is he mama
can we trust him
will he hurt us
we don’t know him mama
mother smiled
he is a stranger
who needs our help
your questions are thoughtful
I can’t answer them
we have to do our best
we need to trust him
the old man smiled
his trembling hands took the cup
he graciously thanked them
as he lifted the cup to his mouth
he whispered something
words they couldn’t hear
the children asked
if he was hungry
but did not wait for an answer
they ran to the kitchen
and brought soup and bread
the old man was polite
he ate it trying not to hurry
but mother and the children
could tell that he was famished
they sat and talked
the children wanted to know if
he had a family
and what was his name
he ignored the question
about his name but said
I have a very large family
all over the world
they are all colors
they speak different languages
they looked at him
is he of sound mind
they wondered
mother changed the subject
where were you going
on this snowy Christmas Eve
he gazed out the window
I am not sure
but over yonder somewhere
I had better get back
onto the road
thank you for your kindness
mother said
you cannot leave in this storm
you must stay here where it is warm
and you are safe
he agreed and thanked her
she showed him to the extra bed
under the stairway
everyone went to bed
but had trouble going to sleep
finally
they heard the old man snoring
they too fell asleep
morning light slid ‘neath the shades
the children jumped out of bed
and ran to the living room
to greet the old man
he was not there
gone
no trace of him
the bed looked as though
no one slept in it
during the night
the snow had stopped falling
but there were no tracks
left by the old man
on the mantle above the fireplace
were three small paper bags
in them were little treats
Christmas candies shaped like stars
and a note that said Merry Christmas
the family was awe struck
who was this man
where did the candy come from
where did he go
what did he mean that his family
was very large all over the world
the candle remained burning
each night in the front window
throughout the children’s childhood
mother died
and the farm house was sold
into the sale agreement
there was written a clause
“the candle must be lit nightly
for one who travels these roads
they may need help”
the new couple honored the agreement
but no one ever stopped again seeking help
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Clyde and Susan McCulley
Stephen Atkinson
Wed 23rd Dec 2020 20:36
A nicely paced poignant tale.