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Nostalgia and I

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And I trip over old dreams 

again and again…

Five hundred times…

A thousand…

Endless shaky steps…

Where I loved you

like a million blue whales…

 

And I often long for the youth 

of those ageing thoughts…

Never ending pretty helium balloons 

reaching for the sun…

Knowing they will never arrive…

 

And what a beautiful, 

yet painful sight…

A sea of sorrowful dots floating in the wind 

yearning for the safety of a string 

tied to a child’s hand…

 

And wistful desires crash land…

Like fragile soap bubbles,

destined to set their dreamer’s breadths free…

 

And my tired heart aches…  

While I play a nostalgic song

to an audience of uncertain paths,

of lost hopes…

Of blank canvases 

craving for every suffering stroke… 

 

And I wonder…

Where are all those battles to rage on?

What have they all become?

When were they left behind?

 

And I trip over old dreams 

again and again…

Five hundred times…

A thousand…

Endless shaky steps…

Where I loved you

like a million blue whales…

 

And I…

 

(Xoanxo 2021)

 

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Xoanxo

Sun 17th Jan 2021 16:56

If you’ve got Amazon Prime I’d recommend watching Searching for Sugar man (a 1 episode documentary on Ramirez and his rather surprising story...)

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 17th Jan 2021 03:24

A double treat! Thanks for introducing me to Ramirez. Listening to his tunes now. Love Heaven & Hurricane. Smooth grooves.

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Xoanxo

Sun 17th Jan 2021 01:28

Thank you very much Vautaw! Written while listening on a loop to "I Think of you" by Ramirez (Searching for Sugar Man)

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 17th Jan 2021 01:01

Wow! Stunning poetry Xoanxo. Thank you for lighting up a dark world. ❤️

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