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Time to shine

Jim was brought up on a farm by his dad,

An ambition to move to the city he'd always had.

In the city he got a job as a shoe-shine boy,

His new occupation brought Jim much joy.

 

His dad was sad to see him gone,

But made hay while his son shone.

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◄ Bob was a cut above his fellow pupils at his new school

There's something fishy going on ►

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 20th Jan 2021 15:53

Of this to some glowing tale
I must take a dim view
Da gave Ma a shiner?
Ma gave Da one too?


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