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the speed of life

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I am just a body
I am just a mind
I’m a collection of skin and bones
And beneath the sky I find
The heat is on both sides
The sun on my front
The sands heat on my hind
Now I know why animals bask
The speed of life these days
Has took as all to task
We have forgotten how to relax
We have grown fins and attacked
I hear grass whisper
Waves collapse
Such the simple and the soothing
Away from all this industry
This dimple is for prooving
Im still a child at heart
I must escape this industry I have become
This factory over run by mechanical thoughts
Of getting things achieved, getting done
I should just lay outstretched forever
Under sea and star and sun
Let this healing cycle repeat
As though nature was my Mum
My body has made a mould into the sand

a personal masseuse

this is the liquid of me

cutting the noose, the enamalled tooth that shines and bites too hard
the crashing wave are the breath
And every hour leaves one less ounce of anguish
As it all drains away through my back
Looking up at the sky I make shapes
And throw my troubles into orbit
As though I'm writing them down
Making a list of all the things that trouble me
Things that normally annoy begin to falter
The demons that like to alter us for the worse
I cast them upwards
And a grumbled curse that needled me
Leaves this thimble of thoughts
And the nervous anticipation of another day
Is soothed for a while.
 

◄ Make me a child

natures seventh seal ►

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Val Cook

Tue 29th Jun 2010 13:25

Love it Pete,its just what we all need. I shall read this when such industry gets to much.
Relax relaxavou. xx

Pete Crompton

Mon 28th Jun 2010 23:22

Mike, thanks, you always encourage me.
Izzy, Francine, Andy, TC, Stefan
thank you all, I think you all connected with the feeling, its a true story, though I was in a car park when I had the idea, the tarmac was hot and I lay down and had a sleep as it warmed my back, wonderful rest, I was healing. thanks x

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Andy N

Mon 28th Jun 2010 13:21

enjoyed this Pete.. Good Stuff.. Would like to more like this as it's got legs.. Good stuff M8!

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Sun 27th Jun 2010 23:51

One word impacts on me,having read this poem-it begins with W-ends with W-and theres an O-in the middle.....WOW!..brilliant Pete-thank you,young man-Stefan.(worth one masculine kiss-X.)

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Sun 27th Jun 2010 18:03

I like this, it has an almost Zen like feel to it, I like the idea of just lying on your back whilst it makes contact with the earth in a grounding type way, effectively being in the zone both above and below.TC

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Francine

Sun 27th Jun 2010 16:17

The title says it all Peter.
Yes,'We have forgotten how to relax'...
We have lost our way in the enjoyment of simple pleasures...
'Im still a child at heart'... it is the same for me ; )

xxxxx

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Isobel

Sun 27th Jun 2010 12:22

A nice reflective one Pete. The sea has that affect, doesn't it? Though you'd have to walk a long way to get to it in Southport - and you are normally lying in something other than sand when you get there!

I like the gentle timelessness of it all - it reminds me a bit of another poem you wrote using the sea. I also like the idea of 'throwing our troubles into orbit' - if only we could...xx

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Noetic-fret!

Sun 27th Jun 2010 11:46

Pete my man! This, although one of your shorter poems is absolutely fantastic. So much emotion and so much declared. There is pain here i can identify with on many levels. Just wish i had the chance to bask in the sun awhile too. But yeah, i can really identify with the easing of your mind and soul on a beach basking in the sun. Nice one Pete.

stay well

Much love and respec to you.

Mike

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