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The Revolution of Old Possum (il miglior fabbro)

  i
From the streets of Dublin
the hordes re-Joyce
as Odysseus waxes lyrical
with colloquial finesse
    his golden tongue spitting fire
steamrolling the jargon wagon 
on stairway rails from tube to paper.

Live stream of consciousness
flows from depths below
bellowing out of shadows
an intoxicating wave
breaking the surf on black peaks
of spiked stone keys typed in gonzo.

  ii
Aristotle stood firm
at the pulpit in his symposium
while his quill penned poetics
preaching the genius
of metaphor and metaphysics.

Embryonic parsel-tongue
waving a wand in wizardry
from ink fountains bursting on parchment 
delivering the gift
of ribbon wrapped eloquence. 

  iii
Unbuttoned rolling flow
in fluid monologue
skipping ropes of jazz speak
unedited
unfiltered rivers
where rough diamonds are crowned king.

Standing on one leg
inspecting the heart
the past fell
growing arachnid telescopes
and digging in every anatomical tract
to extract the distilled essence.

  iv
Musical motif
shining constellation of text tessellation

Lyrical relief
binding formation to flex evocation.

  v
Vineyard winding with jump cut scenes
fermenting fruit
ripe for the picking
inducing intoxication laced reading
    sliced and spliced
a chalice of spice
blinking
weaving
overflowing.

Godard's lens zooms
blooming in district cloud nine
rolling balls of raw nervous energy
shaking from screen to belly.

  vi
Magician of allusion
pulling Shakespeare out of his hat
peeping from leaves of grass
and Walt's multitude of class.

Join the dots and fill in the blank
to a spectacle
for spectators wearing spectacles
who open their cans of interpretation 
worming out and ransacking the sack.

  vii
Unchain the shackles of form
abandoning umbrellas
for free falling
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  viii
From Greek theater's
staging Freud's favourite play
to a trek with a scarecrow,
a tin man and Dorothy's pet lion 
  the hard to swallow 
jagged little pill
pulls the wool over hollow eyes.

... the lowest form of wit
... the highest form of intelligence

- the wilde wit-king wrote
wearing a fab fur coat.

  ix
Jigsaw piece of the trivium
with five canons plugged into the auxesis
aimed at the poet
while unfolding inner turmoil
and cleaning out the cobwebs
in the closet of self.

The only thing worth writing about is the human heart in conflict with itself

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◄ the night never ends

Absinthe Alley with my Green Fairy ►

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Rob Cohen

Thu 28th Jan 2021 08:15

Inspired by several of T. S. Eliot's essay's relating to Modernism.
The precepts in summary.
1. common speech
2. importance of metaphor
3. psychological realism / stream of consciousness
4. musical arrangement
5. film 'jump-cut' technique
6. allusion & referencing
7. organic form
8. irony / satire / sarcasm
9. rhetoric

* Epilogue quote from William Faulkner’s speech at the Nobel banquet

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