I Cannot Cling
Today's blog is another in which there are two versions of the same poem. This time we have a short and a long version. If I were to keep only one I would probably keep the long version but since they are meditations I feel like it is OK for there to be two versions of the poem.
Version 1 – Long
In Death I cannot cling to who I am or was,
I will not know or see or hear or think,
If then nothing else but absolute peace
Why not now whilst I yet live?
And why this restless interest in
what I or others think that I may be?
And how does bitter struggle benefit
above of sweet release?
It comes compelling as a siren's song
But what might letting go let go amiss?
Would that I could see up to the end
of a path like this.
What lies beyond needing nothing?
Is it strength or insanity?
Is it accepting death or accepting life?
Version 2 – Short
In Death I cannot cling to who I am or was,
I will not know or see or hear or think,
If then nothing else but absolute peace
Why not now whilst I yet live?
Would that I could see up to the end
of a path like this.
What lies beyond needing nothing?
Is it strength or insanity?
Is it accepting death or accepting life?
Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Sat 6th Feb 2021 18:10
Thank you Stephen for your comment and for expressing a preference.
The shorter version is more direct, surprising and mysterious, whereas the longer version is more ornate with metaphor and word-play and has some additional explanation and concepts. it's a 48%/52% preference and it changes all the time for me, sometimes from moment to moment, which I prefer more ?