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Disesteem

Painful embers stab the dark

Of pain too rich to bear

Callous flames, beguile a heart

Left stained by acrid air

Dreams denied by rancid thoughts

On lips too vain to care

Lifetimes lost in frozen eyes

A soul beyond repair

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◄ Helter Skelter

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 9th Feb 2021 13:54

This is very eloquent and seems to capture the mood so well that I wish it would progress to resolve the state reached (and become a meditative poem).

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