FIFTIES' HOLIDAY
Light floods in to illuminate our special day,
Mum all a-bustle
preparing the way
for the scrubbed and considered version of my father,
head of the family, old before I was born.
The light turns to sun as we spill
from the tipped taxi onto a London bound platform
await the dark green masterpiece
of an all singing all dancing electric train
that takes us in art deco grimy heaven
past suburban semis,
the lazy drift of yards, factories
all a-shimmer, into the girdered greenhouse of Waterloo.
Then once into the westbound train slumbering
like a stately lion on the asphalt pampas,
doors wrenched open each and every one,
boiler pressure right up;
the holiday has begun.
raypool
Thu 11th Feb 2021 16:55
I appreciate you looking in Keith and that there was a resonance with your own experiences, always precious of course! We can't know what youth today will store for the future, but it will certainly be tinged with the same auras, as were my father and mother's own before me. One thing I do know - there are so many smells gone that would take us instantly back, most of them not to today's liking no doubt!
And thanks a lot to Jennifer, Brian, Julie, Stephen, Aisha, Aviva and Holden to whom I must present an award for ongoing awareness of my efforts.
Ray