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FIFTIES' HOLIDAY

Light floods in to illuminate our special day,

Mum all a-bustle

preparing the way

for the scrubbed and considered version of my father,

head of the family, old before I was born. 

 

The light turns to sun as we spill

from the tipped taxi onto a London bound platform

await the dark green masterpiece

of an all singing all dancing electric train

that takes us in art deco grimy heaven

past suburban semis,

the lazy drift of yards, factories

all a-shimmer, into the girdered greenhouse of Waterloo. 

 

Then once into the westbound train slumbering

like a stately lion on the asphalt pampas,

doors wrenched open each and every one,

boiler pressure right up;

the holiday has begun. 

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raypool

Thu 11th Feb 2021 16:55

I appreciate you looking in Keith and that there was a resonance with your own experiences, always precious of course! We can't know what youth today will store for the future, but it will certainly be tinged with the same auras, as were my father and mother's own before me. One thing I do know - there are so many smells gone that would take us instantly back, most of them not to today's liking no doubt!

And thanks a lot to Jennifer, Brian, Julie, Stephen, Aisha, Aviva and Holden to whom I must present an award for ongoing awareness of my efforts.

Ray

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 16:40

Ray,
A poem which restores those images stored in some cerebral cavity which lets us see ourselves as we once were. My memories are of a motorbike and sidecar, caravan parks, paddling in rock pools and eating packed lunches. Halcyon days indeed of which the present generation know little of.

Thank you for this trip down memory lane.
Keith

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