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Your Eyes

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I'd like to take a look at me
Through your eyes.
I want to see what you see
When you focus on me.
 
Do you see a friend?  A lover?
A confidante?  A brother?
Or do you just see me,
Just another random other?
 
I'd like to see what you see
Maybe then I’d understand
Why you just don't notice.
Why don't you notice me?
 
I'd like to take a look at me
Through your eyes.
Maybe then I'd understand.

◄ In the Blood

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Steven Kenny

Wed 30th Jun 2010 12:38

Not even with my manly new scar Rachel!? :-)

Thanks for the comment though! :-)

Rachel Bond

Wed 30th Jun 2010 11:40

in my eyes kenny youre lovely like a cherub...sorry if this is not 'you are rugged like a swarthy handsome film actor', but i think its better x

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