And finally...
they found my body.
I was wondering where I'd left it.
Two days it had been there,
all alone and fly blown.
In its death it served new life,
a multitude of little breaths.
I rather like the irony in that.
Two days is a lifetime for some,
the end of a lifetime for me.
Ignoble in the extreme,
to have all those people
looking at my death mask,
my final gift to the world.
Roll up, roll up; come see the show.
From unknown to newsworthy.
They say that they knew
that I was having problems.
They say that nothing is that bad.
They say a lot now it's over,
and I find that very sad.
They didn't say anything
Two days before; didn't want to offend.
Funny how two days can change everything.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Tue 13th Jul 2010 11:16
Excellent, Stephen. All the prior comment express it all - the idea is novel and beautifully worded. I liked the 'understanding' underlying 'didn't want to offend', currently a PC restriction we all find hard to bypass for more sympathetic human contact.