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Armed

Narcissus stared at the art work

before selecting a martial sleeve.

A fusion of Japanese gangster

and Polynesian tribal.

 

Hand function was straightforward.

Ranging from tea ceremony

to stone crusher,

crocodile wrestler

was the choice.

 

She thought her bank authorisation

into the machine

and dropped her old arm

in the recycling tray.

 

Her measurements were scanned.

The arm was made in a few minutes.

Narcissus offered up her stump

for fitting.

 

Nemesis  turned

towards the familiar voice.

His unuttered greeting

collapsed in the crunch

of his destroyed windpipe.

 

Narcissus selected an

unadorned sleeve.

Hand just a few points

light of flower arranger.

vending machinetattoodeathGreek Myth

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Chris Dawson

Fri 2nd Jul 2010 14:10

Hi there Bernard!
I like it ... have I said all this before? I quite like the idea of replacing spent bits with new, do the old get re-cycled? But why are both arms being exchanged? or does it indicate a change of mind? And why do I ask so many questions?
It really is nice to see you back here, and I'm with Janet on the photo.
Juniper
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<Deleted User> (7164)

Thu 1st Jul 2010 08:32

Is this based on poetry critique Mal?
Seems like there's a fair battle going on. It reminds me of the phrase 'he/she gives as good as he/she gets.'

Nice to see you posting again (wish you would find a nicer photo though) :-)

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