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The Red Marriage

 

During their sixty years, it was him:

Always the one thinking big, dreaming

Of contour maps of the shires,

The rapid spread of forest fires,

Views of the moon, magnified,

Deserts, stretching far and wide.

How the diamonds glinted

And his projects hinted

At non-stop, love-soaked fun,

At daring days blessed with sun.

 

While she focused on the miniature:

Collecting particles of sand, sending

Invisible postcards to all;

The distant sunsets seemed too small

To fit in his ambition,

Yet vast for her rendition

Of carefully separated,

Sprinkled, sparkling dust, elevated

To a life, to a meaning.

To one red-coloured evening.

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◄ In the woods

Listening to Tippett ►

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Annie Josephine

Mon 15th Mar 2021 21:39

I love the pace of your poem and how it shows that everyone experiences our world differently.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 11th Feb 2021 17:00

Keith, Jennifer and John

Thank you so much for the comments. I didn't want to write poems about stereotypes, so the roles could just as easily be the other way round. This situation is just an example. But the notion of two people doing shared or parallel things in order to make it through many decades together is quite an inspiring one.

Thanks for the kind comments on the language, Jennifer.

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John Coopey

Wed 10th Feb 2021 21:39

Lovely contrast in relationships, Stephen.
I always say that I deal with the big stuff in our house (whether we leave the EU, whether to impeach Trump etc) while I leave Our Gert to sweat the little stuff (whether we got married, have kids, buy a house etc). It seems to work for us.

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jennifer Malden

Wed 10th Feb 2021 17:40

Great poem! Very perceptive and unusual language - non stop love soaked fun/ the distant sunsets seemed too small to fit in his ambition- yet vast for her rendition. Really liked this. Jennifer

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keith jeffries

Wed 10th Feb 2021 17:09

How two people can compliment each other. Good poem
Keith

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