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Keats in Rome

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Travelled for his health to the half-buried

city of ruins, halfway between

the living and the dead.

Fragments of columns,

toppled arches, broken aqueducts.

Took rooms in a second-floor apartment

at the Piazza di Spagna,

close by the sound of Bernini’s fountain.

Locks of hair exchanged

with Fanny Brawne

before he left for Italy.

Save it for me, sweet love!

 

Only the fireplace and the ceiling remain.

All else was burned upon his death

by orders of the Vatican.

The soul wells up. And yet:

the latest entry in the visitors’ book

a direct descendant of cheery,

carefree Joseph Severn, who nursed

and fed and drew John Keats

before he died. The author

of ‘To Autumn’, a man some critics

scorned as ‘Cockney poet’,

coughed blood, and knew it was his fate.

 

Here lies one whose name

was writ in water.

Longed for the cold earth

and quiet grave. Severn, lift me up

For I am dying. I shall die easy.

Don’t be frightened.

Thank God it has come. 

Through the window,

outside in the sunshine

the tourists whoop and cheer

as yet another couple hug and vow

upon the Spanish Steps.

 

🌷(7)

◄ The jab

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C Byrne

Wed 17th Mar 2021 09:08

It's unbelievable what he managed to write in just 26 years.

The name "Fanny Brawn" for a muse I find very entertaining for some reason ?

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Greg Freeman

Wed 24th Feb 2021 05:34

Thanks for your comments, Graham and Tony, and for your additional one, Stephen. Our Rome trip was six years ago. Reading about Keats back then, I was struck by this image of Italy's neglected and unrestored ruins in the early 19th century. Cows grazed among the strange pillars of the Forum poking up out of the earth.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 23:52

A timely write Greg. I’ve just been reading about the Keats family. All in all a tragic bunch. One of my favourites from schooldays (an age ago) JK had a good pair of eyes. You’ve done him proud here.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 17:29

Reading this again, I would just say that it transported me to Rome and to Keats. Not a bad feat!

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Tony Hill

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 17:21

I sometimes think of the great poems he would have written had he lived longer. Tony

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Greg Freeman

Mon 22nd Feb 2021 17:42

Thanks, Stephen. Not quite laureate standard, I know. But written after a very moving visit to the room where he died, and later to his grave. Thanks for the Likes, Steve and Aviva.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 22nd Feb 2021 17:34

A fine piece, Greg.

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