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When My Heart Starts Dancing

Photographs can find lost connections instead I put my record player on.

Certain favourite songs

rhythm takes flight

full volume on

heart starts dancing

good times spinning

rocking rolling lovers

summers keep coming

past moments click

when needle lifts

records slot time

back into place

feelings stacked ready

to relive love

when music returns

me to something

I never lost.

 

🌷(9)

Lets twist again

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Comments

Kevin T.S. Tan

Mon 1st Mar 2021 10:15

lovely

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Your Royal Poetess

Sun 28th Feb 2021 22:16

Makes me reminisce on the times we could go out and party and live free! Beautiful poem

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Nigel Astell

Sun 28th Feb 2021 02:23

Thanks everyone for your likes
Aviva
Hope Ray
Holden
Jordyn
Stephen A
Julie
Stephen G
The Royal Poetess
and
Kevin T S Tan.

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Nigel Astell

Sun 28th Feb 2021 02:18

The thought of how this might be to see our life span in full circle
looking at it as in spirit form with your soul lover together at last
perhaps in heaven.

Always searching for what could be we can only keep faith
and fighting to make this a better world while we try to live life to the full while still helping others in this moment of time.

I like your poetry a lot and how you are always looking towards the next level Aviva.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 27th Feb 2021 13:17

Love the poem and love the tag too. ?

Metaphysically impossible I know, but somehow it made me ponder what it might be like if our entire lives became like a record that afterwards we are able to replay from start to finish as often as we want to - the full span of it shrunk to almost no time at all against the duration of eternity, we could watch it again and again and it would comprise our heaven and hell depending on what our lives were, and how we would feel about all of its moments from time's distance.

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