Flesh
In the glory of your love,
I lie naked on satin,
Our eyes transfixed
As I watch you undress,
You murmur words in Latin.
Now you peel off your shirt,
I watch your muscles ripple.
You unfasten your belt
And bend to suck my nipple.
I reach for you
But you escape my grasp
To discard the last of your clothes.
Excitement runs through me
As you join me at last,
We kiss with aching longing,
I feel your heart beat fast.
You whisper words of love to me,
In adoring fashion.
Skilful hands roam my body
Until it arches with passion.
Your foreplay teases
And then it pleases,
Bringing me to the heights.
Flesh against flesh,
Skin upon skin,
My body hungrily
Welcomes you in.
Through the good times and bad,
We’ve been so in love
For quite a few years,
Sharing whatever life throws at us,
Our hopes, our dreams, our fears.
Moonlight snakes through
Hastily drawn curtains.
A breath of a breeze
Hits my bedside candle.
It flickers
Then recovers,
Like our love,
Too hot to handle!
Moving together
Sensuously dramatic,
Giving pleasure
So ecstatic
Until at last we cry out in bliss,
Once recovered, seal with a kiss.
<Deleted User> (8408)
Sun 11th Jul 2010 23:57
Hi Lynn - sexy stuff! Loved reading both this one and your free verse and liked them both for different reasons. All in all, I think the free verse flows better and sounds more sophisticated, BUT... you have some beautiful moments in this one. I love the 6th stanza, where all of a sudden you capture feelings of genuine love and affection between these two hot bodies and it adds a certain depth to the piece. I liked the rhyme in the 7th stanza - too hot to handle indeed! - and its lightheartedness adds a buoyancy to the poem. I love that you can write about anything and I really look forward to reading more of your work. Many thanks for sharing. Dianna.