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Forget The Forgive.

Age old

'Forgive and forget'

Forget the forgive

Accept

No point crying over spilt milk.

It staled

Did it not?

Yes it did.

That's the end

A curdled state

By the looks of it

 

Take a deep breath

Think

Forget the forgive

Accept.

◄ 12/02/10.

Lucky Number Nine. ►

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Bernadette Herbertson

Sat 10th Jul 2010 22:42

like this one..lines of few words can have great meanings...Bernadette

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 9th Jul 2010 12:15

This is super! A vital philosophy in a nutshell. I think 'staled' avoids the connotations of 'soured', a word which would have altered the whole point.

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Andy N

Tue 6th Jul 2010 23:03

the short word lines is very well wrote here, chuck.

enjoyed this a lot..

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alisonsmiles68@gmail.com

Mon 5th Jul 2010 12:42

Succinct! Was the 6th line staled or stalled? I was just wondering if soured might relate to the milk more closely than staled?

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