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Freefalling

I have captured the beauty of the sun,
But you do not look.
Here in my heart lies the serenity of heaven,
            Yet you are so far away.
Lone bird. Circling through,
While I
Stare into a blazing sky,
             To catch a flash of dark.


Tied to this earth,
I am wrapped in flames of desire
            For a touch that never happens.
My soul
Fights with the wind,
We swoop so low, and then...
You are the running deer between the trees,
            Always out of reach.


And I can imagine the breeze rocking me down
                                 To earth.
           As the leaves float down beneath.
And we are both under this eternal tree,
                   You, innocently asleep
                           While I
Pluck green grass from out your hair,
           Plaiting it through my own.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 3rd Apr 2021 12:07

Thank you for your comment Ferris Ty Taylor.
I'm really happy that this poem impressed you that much.
Though, I'm concerned that I won't live up to the expectation

Thank you for exploring back through some of my poems too.
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Ferris Ty Taylor

Sat 3rd Apr 2021 10:40

Stunning. I swear the poets on here have drastically improved.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 3rd Apr 2021 02:10

Thank you for your comments Ghazala and Nigel. ?

Ghazala I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

Nigel, just as you say, it did come true.


Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem. ?

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Nigel Astell

Sat 3rd Apr 2021 01:50

Falling in love
one day soon
poem comes true.

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Ghazala lari

Fri 2nd Apr 2021 05:35

Beautifully penned ✍

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