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Stuck On You

Can't get you out of my mind.
Can't halt your stay in my mind.
Can't halt my mind.
Can't hold my breath.
Can't hug death.

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short poemlove's tempestunrequited love

◄ Reckless Abandon

A Piece Of Him ►

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 5th Apr 2021 11:04

Thank you, New Shoes, for your uplifting and encouraging comment. ?

The line 'Can't hug death' intended to suggest that death would bring no comfort and that death wasn't welcome.

Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

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New Shoes

Mon 5th Apr 2021 05:46

you can't hug death, but it can surround the only light you have left. A star thrown off into the far off isolated regions of space surrounded by darkness. The only emitting light being that of its own with nothing to reflect or emit the light back to remember the warmth of love and relationship. gravitate your mind and heart to love and rebuild the cosmos that align with your creation, and may your truth set you free and ward of the thoughts of death's inflictions.

Peace

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