Ambridge cries
Every pity a pithy platitude
pecking at ears too tired to hear.
I'm so sorry for your loss they exude,
isn't it too soon to return my dear?
I think you're marvellous to cope so well
pounds at her protesting brain. No outlet
to explain they enshroud an empty shell
in a net of lies and angry regret,
tethered down by wellwishers assumptions,
the widest wires not guiding but binding.
To lookers lives minimum disruption
keeping clear of a widow confiding -
that actually, no, life's not all that great
when all that's left is minus my soul mate.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Mon 12th Jul 2010 12:37
Good piece, Alison, to highlight the effective uselessness of 'supportive' comments after bereavement. Especially when an honest answer given in confidence steers people off.
I find the alliterative 'p' simulates 'pecking' and is quite effective.