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wrath

Embers flicker and glow,

taking things nice and slow,

breaking out of it’s cold prison,

a remnant of unwanted ignition.

 

Breathing in the outside air,

licks of flame reach and dare,

slightly heated in their struggle,

as the arsonist starts to giggle.

 

No longer easily contained,

angry torrents flutter in orange,

roaring for attention enraged,

burning all within and on the fringe.

 

Turning everything to ash,

this inferno is nothing but brash,

stuck in this endless conflagration,

losing control of an unfortunate situation.

 

Desolation as far as the eye can see,

burned all the bridges of this ashen sea,

no more indecisive turning back,

everything has been turned to black.

🌷(5)

ragedestructionfire

◄ confused poem by a confused mind

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Igneus

Mon 7th Jun 2021 22:23

I'm glad you think it fits those genres Aviva. Certainly would be interesting to hear it in that style.

Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poem

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 5th Jun 2021 11:18

This would make a great heavy metal or even death metal song, I can hear it performed in that sort of style.

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