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The shopping parade

Sent to the Co-op and its cold,

marble counters with a list,

'Divi’ number inscribed in my head,

lolly on way home as reward.

Slumbering summer day

reminds me of errands

many decades past.

 

Trees still deliver shade.

Dustpan, brush and broom

at the ironmongers.

Nostalgic gaps

on the supermarket shelves.

I remember things that had

to be crossed off the list.

 

But my mind’s playing tricks.

Turkish pop songs in the barbers,

Oriental health therapies

on offer, kebabs,

tattoo parlour,

an Italian tile warehouse

that’s been there for years.

 

It still feels the same, somehow.

Maybe the shopfront scenery

changed, but not a state of mind.

Maybe that’s why people

keep saying to me:

Let sleeping dogs lie.

But what does that even mean?

 

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◄ Cornfield at evening

The poisoned garden ►

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Greg Freeman

Thu 14th Oct 2021 15:01

Hello, Anne, fancy seeing you here! Green post boxes, you say? I never heard of such a thing, m'lud ... You certainly have a better memory than me for that sequence of shops at Alexandra Drive! Many happy memories, indeed.

Anne Bate

Thu 14th Oct 2021 13:49

Has transported me to Northcote Ave back in the 1960s! I also did errands to the Co-op, past Edith Gardens where one day an elderly lady had locked herself out and asked me (age approx 9) to climb in her window to open her door. Then on past the fishmonger, newsagent/sweet shop, baker, post office, bike shop, hairdresser, draper/woolshop, laundrette, greengrocer, butcher, hardware shop to the Co-op. The Off Licence was last on the row! Thanks for the memories. So many good ones! Green post boxes, races around the block, playing on the streets etc etc

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Greg Freeman

Sun 27th Jun 2021 08:23

Thanks for your comments, Ray and Stephen. Yes, I was quite surprised by the last stanza, too, Ray. It's nice when a poem does that to you.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 26th Jun 2021 17:06

Thanks, Greg. My parents used to go to the Co-op (I can't remember being trusted with such things). They were quite right-wing but liked the dividend.

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raypool

Fri 25th Jun 2021 22:08

Interesting piece Greg. The days of shops with nothing wrapped in plastic is a big change. The choice of privately run businesses many, and always MacFisheries, smells of butchers and bakers mingling. Tokens were certainly on offer. in my home town we had William's discs as tokens. The phrase of Let sleeping dogs lie is like a trump card somehow!

Ray

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