sunday afternoon
Like butterflies they flock upon the beach.
So many colours!
Stripey awnings fragile tents boogie boards
bare legs and flowery shorts
sun hats and pink shoulders.
All as busy as bees!
There’s such an urgency
in damming streams
and making sandcastles before the tide comes in.
The sea is wild but welcoming.
I brought a book with me.
A solitary woman on the beach.
In years gone by
I might have wished them gone
but now I like to watch the people.
For everyone is happy on the beach.
They have their fun before the tide comes in
then back to caravan or b&b
and cream and jam and scones
for Sunday tea.
I think “observer” is the role for me,
to sit and watch
waves and humanity roll by.
The beach shrinks and we all squeeze up
and it’s like a warm caress
and I go home content,
for I have shared their happiness.
Joshua Van-Cook
Mon 26th Jul 2010 16:04
I really like this, there's a certain metaphorical quality to 'To sit and watch
waves and humanity roll by.'
This contrasts nicely with some of the more concrete/ mundane items and places in the poem. It feels like a painting, rendered in every visible dimension. Really well done.
- Josh